Sunday, 17 July 2011

Clothed, standing (Meredith and Mary Sue)

Another WIP in pencil. This is Meredith and a Morvanian Mary Sue. Meredith's Mary Sue, in fact. Meredith would like very much to be tall, look impressive in plate, have neat hair and look her age. Unfortunately she's on the short end of average, baby-faced and will never, ever have neat hair.

Morvanian Mary Sue is kind of a smug bitch.

Tell me what's wrong! :D This one is a clusterfuck of annoying difficult angles and HAND WOE. The feet need a lot of work. Ugh.

1 comment:

  1. Heads are well-drawn (poss a bit cartoony, but not overly) but too big to match the bodies they are on. Similarly necks are a bit too long/wide/prominent. I'm not sure Meredith's clothes follow her body outline so much as just being transparent, which is a subtley different thing. Morvanian legs are very good. :D

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