My God does she hate me.
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The mouth is wrong. (She's awkward because she talks out of the side of her mouth.) Also, there's something going on with the back. When I look at it, it keeps shifting like an optical illusion. It is not obviously as "back facing, turned slightly" rather than "front facing" torso. The shoulders are off. The fall of the skirt is wrong wrong wrong. What needs changing?
Megan's comments:
ReplyDeleteFirstly, very difficult poses. Back views and seated ones are hard, but the basic postures you ahave there are good. Topless heresy's arm on the left is very good, especially the hand :)
Shoulders are round, the round part is separate to the chest, I really suggest having a look at anatomical illustations, they are a great deal of help, especially skeletons. Ribcages are narrow at the top - look at skeletons.